Review: Four Princes by Cassie Alexandra and C. J. Pinard

by - January 04, 2019

Four Princes
by Cassie Alexander and C. J. Pinard
Published by: Pinard House Publishing, LLC
June 28th, 2018
Genre: Fantasy
Format: eBook
Source: Kindle Unlimited
Rating: 2 Stars
     Four Kingdoms. No Heir. An Uncertain Future. 
     After an evil curse is cast upon the four corners of Syracuse, a vast country ruled by the Rothhaven family, maidens across the land suddenly become barren. 
Years pass, and the future of Family Rothhaven looks bleak, until eighteen-year-old Mariselle Langer wakes up one morning with cramps, a craving for chocolate, and a highly unexpected visit from Aunt Flow. 
     Upon realizing that his daughter is different from the other maidens, Mariselle’s father approaches the leaders of the four kingdoms with the wonderful news. This sets off a chain of events which threaten to divide the Rothhaven brothers, who all desire her for themselves, and not just because she can give them an heir. 
     Meanwhile, Mariselle has her own ideas about whom she wishes to wed, which not only shocks the nation, but ultimately… saves it.


     I picked up this book because it sounded interesting. What I didn't know was that more than half the book was going to be the story of how the curse came to be. This book is advertised as reverse harem but we don't get anything harem related at all.

     The first and only sex scene comes at about 90% of the book and it's only with one of the brothers. I know this is a trilogy and the story will continue in the next two books but if you are advertising a book having some elements then for Christ's sake put those elements in the book.

     Aside from that this is supposedly a re-edited version of a previous book but this book too needed a lot of editing. There were a lot of grammar issues. And now I need to read the other two books to find out how this ends? Insert eye roll here!

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